i didn't know your leaving
nor wasn't told you'd gone
not knowing you were knowing
that i'd know i was not one
she left me all alone
not wanting to be one
i listened to her leaving
i new she had gone
so: she's not leaving knowing
so: she's listened to her gone
that knew she wanted leaving
left me the only one.
Steve as we are in ' Interesting times' 'I will therefore be brief' everyone seems to declare an 'amnisty' for themselves in their poetry and shake glum heads when challanged...AE your goodself and I (regaly) are exceptional in this regard. I apologise to anyone who I have forgotten.
Ta for your comment Steve: This also is a strange and not uncomfortably pleasant experience. The logic is like trying to jugle full milk bottles and when hearing the door- walking out-leaving behind a milky floor!...as for the typo's..............HOW DEAR YOU!
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Nichola Burrows
Fri 2nd Oct 2009 19:20
Well, I won't be casting any spells tonight. I like this, and there is no backdoor slammin' in it. Sadness, loneliness and a bit of angst.