The end of an affair

I leant against the wall 

with my eyes closed

each draw blew

smoke rings 

watching her pack 

I flicked the ash 

onto the bare floor 

unconcernedly

she avoided eye contact 

one arm across my chest

another upright

holding a cigarette 

as I leant against the wall 

and flicked the ash 

onto the bare floor. 

 

words and foto T Carroll 

 

 

 

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Sat 17th Jun 2017 01:04

Thanks chaps - Tommy

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Paul Waring

Mon 15th May 2017 11:46

Like this very much Tommy. Crafted. And dead cool.

Paul

<Deleted User> (13762)

Mon 15th May 2017 09:03

love it - touch of the French art house

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