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become something frail

you-      

under milky moonlight

you-

thrashing beneath my strong arms

here is the dirty man with the ruin between his legs

bleeding now, he is an ampersand, a victory

we pull his teeth from his mouth, screaming, crying

laughing, it’s raining                       

and because we cannot shed our skin

you can only climax

with a gun pressed to your

temple and i-

i sweat brine under cold showers

you asked me once what my favourite place was

and I said wherever your shadow falls

 

 

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◄ leaves of glass

incorrectly identifying the arias of mario lanza due to the sheer volume of the voices in our heads ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (13762)

Wed 17th May 2017 08:39

excellent last line - quality writing as always.

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Raj Ferds

Wed 17th May 2017 07:31

Contrary to the title this piece has power Stu.
Superb!

Raj

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Paul Waring

Tue 16th May 2017 22:00

As good as ever Stu. As Ray says, the power indeed comes shining through.

Great stuff.

Paul

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raypool

Tue 16th May 2017 19:27

A parable to the unknown Stu - the power comes shining through, a glorious array of images as always - I think of a kaleidoscope shaken and revealed . Great stuff.

Ray

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