The Mayfly Dance
The Mayfly Dance
It snowed on Christmas Eve
Nineteen Seventy Six
But that was later.
Earlier we had all met up
In our favourite student pub
Everyone under age and eager
The girls in cheesecloth shirts
And tight fitting Levis
The boys sporting long hair and moustaches
We didn’t look Seventeen
As we chose the jukebox plays
Of Zeppelin, Skynyrd and Quo.
You weren’t even on my radar
Far too beautiful for the likes of me
But we finished the night sat together
Beautiful in a way
That only seventies boys would understand
Like the blonde one in Abba
You asked me would I walk you home
And I couldn’t believe my luck
And rushed to answer “Yes”
Your lips were soft and open when we kissed
Transferring the unlawful taste
Of Vodka, Lime, Black Russians
And then it started to snow
And my senses were so alive
I felt each stinging prick of snowflakes on my skin
Our footsteps in the snow
Leading to her front door
And the offer of a coffee
Then I went home
And wondered at the newly whitewashed landscape
As though my heart had been reset
Back to school a fortnight later
And though she smiled and nodded
That was it – over in a Mayfly’s dance
Then – and only then
Did I realise your kisses
Were given cheaper than a taxi fare
It snowed on Christmas Eve
Nineteen Seventy Six
The night I grew much older
<Deleted User> (13762)
Mon 22nd May 2017 08:56
I like this lots Ian, especially the heart resetting line. However I do find the mayfly analogy somewhat out of context with the Christmas Eve setting although I understand why you have used it. I once walked a (future) girlfriend home on New Year's Eve and a shooting star briefly crossed the night sky. I wonder if something like that might be more fitting although on second thoughts it might make it a bit cheesy and Disneyfied. Not really a big criticism Ian, more me thinking out loud if you don't mind. All the best, Colin.