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ARE WE ALREADY DEAD?....

Are we already dead? And could this be hell? How can we tell? How do we know,we never passed through the door of death....? Is this the next step? Is death..in fact life? And is life in fact death? Is this the reason we fear our last breath? Because we are scared to live? Is this....the here and now...the pergatory we fear of.....? Is this the test and judgement we hear of? What is the afterlife? Is this where god will have its revenge,? And avenge his prophets? And reward his diciples...., Or punish the idle... With things so bad and times so testing....., Its time to start asking the ultimate question.... Are we already dead?.....

◄ TIME TO EVOLVE

YOU WON IN THE END.... ►

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Daniel Hooks

Sat 10th Oct 2009 12:41

as a poet friend said to me this might be the afterlife if so we dream it!

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Thu 8th Oct 2009 10:57

Someone once said to me that if you are upside down you are ok. It made perfect sense to me at the time and so does your poem Yosh.

Janet.x

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 7th Oct 2009 20:57

You are young, yes? And a real thinker? Life will not be easy for you, but it will be glorious. Thoughts like these are ancient; but give them new life for your generation. You are living at an amazing crossroads of the meaning of life on our planet. If I sound like a jerk, I'm sorry. You started it.

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Isobel

Wed 7th Oct 2009 13:24

Yes - it often feels that way Yosh - particularly when other people want us dead - LOL. I like the thought processes in this.

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Nichola Burrows

Wed 7th Oct 2009 11:16

I like the questioning quality of this, questions regarding life and death and inverting the theory on it's head. - don't shout at me ( because I make spelling errors here and there and 'typo's' ) pergatory?- purgatory. Diciples? - disciples.

Thought you developed the illusion of existence really well and highlighted the uncertainty of faith, and the uncertainty of what life is. Is our chaotic existence on earth really hell? Do we get another chance? Suppose that comes down to what you believe in. :-)

Nicky x

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