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Burning

English summers, often damp, can invoke long stifling twilights

Nothing landbound needlessly moves

Contrails crayon across the sky

So many, this close to London’s hub

Distantly, the buzz of a low plane, pleasure rider reaching up

Into the realm of the starlings as they sussurate

A car comes past in the lane droning away round the curves

Here the runway cross remains

The old tower still stands intact

As ponies munch and cattle chew

Larks lurk in the grass where bombers once turned

Occasional ironwork testament to hydrants and gun emplacements

War and weapons layered over by Nature and time

But, as the dark deepens,  the lost come home

Tearing blazing incandescent screams rustle up drowsy birds

Look up and the dazzling burning blurs past

Metal screeches as it tears apart, each time the same

One last attempt at landing whole, at bringing the crate home

So wanting to see sweethearts and Blighty again

Then gone, back to oblivion

The burning pilot saluted you as he passed

 

 

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raypool

Fri 26th May 2017 22:18

A delicious journey into a past redolent of conflicts and somehow romantic as well as spirited. Very enjoyable stuff.

Ray

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Kim Whysall-Hammond

Fri 26th May 2017 20:46

Good -- I wanted that shiver! ?

....and somehow I've never seen the video....that's a bit shivery too...

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keith jeffries

Fri 26th May 2017 19:54

Colin, your video has me awash with nostalgia. A revive forty five or a rave from the grave. Keith

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keith jeffries

Fri 26th May 2017 19:47

Hello Kim, this beautifully written poem speaks of a distant time of emotion and intensity since forgotten. Many years ago I served on such an airfield and your poem caused me to gently shiver. Keith

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Fri 26th May 2017 19:44

I'm reminded of two things Kim - film burn from an old projector and this:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4vgcYBwyw28

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Kim Whysall-Hammond

Fri 26th May 2017 17:44

Thank you for your kind words, much appreciated.

The airfield I describe is Greenham Common, which has many stories to tell. I intended to tell the story of the crashed nuclear bomber (which the USAF claim is a folktale and not true!), but instead, it morphed to something WW2, based on ghost stories told me by my Godmother, who had been a Spitfire mechanic on active airfields in that war.

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