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The automatic weapon carries his weight

as like the twist of a coin

destiny focusses in significant sight

 

his to serve the piercing spinning bullets.

Panther still

half crouched

behind deep shadowed walls

in blistered sun death whispers

 

unheralded names

in sand.

 

Personal histories explode to oblivion

cacophonies of blood oiled tendons

reap death harvest under uniforms

 

Pumped full some spills out,

then emotions, checked against

long festering echoes cry horror

 

of darkly serving co-ordinated bliss

unknown harmonies

death rattles of religion

that have to justify all of this.

 

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◄ DOWN MEMORY LANE

SILVERSIDES v CHARRINGTON ►

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raypool

Sat 17th Jun 2017 10:59

Thank you for your much appreciated Suki. Sometimes you try to summarize actions into thoughts and if you're lucky you get a sort of hole in one, other times things seem to unravel. It is nice as you know to get a result. This one seemed to hit of dead spot, so I'm very happy that you like it!

Ray

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suki spangles

Sat 17th Jun 2017 04:42

of darkly serving co-ordinated bliss..

That one line pretty much says it for me. Brilliant poem.

Suki

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