Donations are essential to keep Write Out Loud going    

Suckle Numple

Bruise me

honeysweet
suckley 
meat

Fill my orifices 
with
whip cream

In me a mess
a sin in my holy
i pout

don't
serve it up
slowly

🌷(4)

◄ Sour Fingers

His Before Mine ►

Comments

Profile image

AM Cash

Fri 16th Jun 2017 23:32

Brave

Profile image

Seán Maguire

Fri 16th Jun 2017 22:27

Liked this strong sensual theme.

Profile image

Michaela Sheldon

Thu 15th Jun 2017 22:56

Wow! I really do picture a venus flytrap now that i read it over again! That is really, really cool

Profile image

raypool

Thu 15th Jun 2017 21:54

Safe in my cage of advanced age, all I can say is I appreciate what you have written here - most imaginative and it reminds me of those venus flytrap plants (check it out)! Daren't say more.

Ray

Profile image

Raj Ferds

Thu 15th Jun 2017 20:37

Michaela a real quickie that was. Just the way you wanted it. Obviously there's many sides to you and you seemed to have broken the mould. Pieces like this are a sure sign of release....a culmination of good/bad/dirty emotions. I thought the title was charming.

Poetic and erotic!

Raj

Profile image

Robert Mann

Thu 15th Jun 2017 20:28

Michaela - I hope you get what you're looking for, but you know what they say - 'Be careful what you wish for'.
Haha
Rob

Profile image

Michaela Sheldon

Thu 15th Jun 2017 20:25

haha nope, thats exactly what I was going for! Wanted to write something dirty on a page and this is what showed up from it! Something bad seemed good since i am having a not so nice day

Profile image

Robert Mann

Thu 15th Jun 2017 20:09

Michaela - this reads like a drunk text 'booty call'. Is that intentional or does this need an edit? Either way, it certainly shows you in a different light. Haha
Rob

If you wish to post a comment you must login.

This site uses cookies. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.

Find out more Hide this message