ceremony
Chabako temae
You tear in to the house
A hurricane of malcontent
And of course I am in
Waiting for you
My little wooden box
A nuclear blast
The stench of him rolls behind you
Down the stairs
A bridal train
Wretched now, I come, I come
Hakobi Temae
Atoms are split as
Mitochondria dance as
They spit from the soup and
Epochs clatter as
You take the cups out and
I die four score and twenty as
The kettle clicks and
we begin the dissection
Obon Temae
It’s the way the steam
Puffs at your lenses
A morning on the moors
But hot
Somehow hot
And because of the mist
I do not see the tears until
They are beating at the bruises
On your cheeks – a rainy day
Spent sat in a car, racing the droplets
Down down down
Wind down the window
Hold up your fingers now
Catch the trees and the buildings and
Snap them in two
To somehow gain control
Ryurei
It tastes like peach
He says
But he is lying
raypool
Tue 27th Jun 2017 21:18
What stands out for me Stu is how you have gone with poetry pick and shovel into a culture that is full of subtleties and mined out the goodness . Your explanation chimes with my understanding of Indian Raga rhythms with their delicate and exact structure.
Main man as ever.
Ray