SLOW DEATH ON A SLIDING SCALE
When I dragged out the box of coal
in the yard there was that moment
when I destroyed a snail
or at least its shell
and thus its sole means of defence
created from pure beauty of design,
the soaring strength of spiral,
the soft palp glistening and exposed.
The death of a snail on a cosmic scale
of one to ten would I know be regarded
as quite low maybe above the insect
and below a mouse,
the degree of revulsion involved
being perhaps a mitigating circumstance
conceived by the creator on his big spiral.
What upset me most were the slow twists and turns
the confused antennae
not knowing where to go
and so so slow
in the dull destiny of its death.
Having some sense of decency left
I took the morsel to the soft earth
beneath a low shady shrub
departed the scene of the crime
the coal quite forgotten
and blessed the sudden passing of time.
raypool
Fri 7th Jul 2017 11:30
Many thanks all for your warm and enlightening comments.
Suki, I have to own up , I used the glass in that short period before I discovered my nicer self. (Ants were the sufferers).
LCP I'm glad I passed muster. A constant tearing at the conscience with "pests" can leave a hole in the personal ozone layer.
Thanks Hazel. Nice wider context comment!
Cheers Cynthia. I like to drop the occasional philosophical idea in - I think it's valid to express experience as you often do in your work. Sometimes it chimes.
Stu,thanks for your valued view - always going for the juice in the centre. You old wordsmith you!
David, I like that you use obscenity, spot on. It is unlikely that humans will ever bother to create snails in the lab. The hiding of the snail was I think for a coolness to prevail and sense of decorum and a tiny tribute to an inconsequential life destroyed. To save suffering an instant death would be better! How much awareness may we attribute to any lesser creature? Survival is instinct and I instinctively tried to backtrack.
I'll get my coat.
Thank you Micheala, glad you spotted that!.