Thinking (a tanka)
Thinking
Thinking likely makes
more problems than it solves but,
if that is your bent,
know: the deeper the abyss
the higher the apogee.
Cynthia Buell Thomas
Comments
I like the 'deep' thought that went into this one Cynthia and the message you are putting across.
Hi Cynthia, thanks for the nice welcome back. It has been a busy summer.
I find it hard to work out how to respond to comments, except by going to your blog. I guess thats good as I then read your work here too.
I like the language you use, and the way you make emotions very physically grounded.
I read the 'Resting' poem at Hebden last week and it went down well, so I thought I would share it wider. I am not bold in sharing my poems. quite hesitant with some. Especially longer ones. Do you only write short ones or do you feel the blog expects short poems?
Freda
short and effective like so many great poems, good approach!
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Sun 18th Oct 2009 11:21
A thought which is a perigee to my heart.
You write beautifully.
Augusta x