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paths home

steady pressure on this

slow drip leak inside

 

keeps my feet wet--

but I can't tell.

 


I set my feet to running

 

to avoid standing

amidst a flood

 

but still cherish

the fruit of the ground

 

that's watered by tears

 

shed over what

might be left behind.

🌷(4)

◄ gulf

looking backward (a sign during the day) ►

Comments

elPintor

Sun 30th Jul 2017 23:48

Good to hear from you, always, Suki and Ray.

Rachel

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raypool

Sun 23rd Jul 2017 16:48

I will go with instinct to say I don't think you are referring to an actual leak on a mundane level. A leak internally is quite a different thing - is it psychological or physical? Always you present us with options.

Great stuff as always Rachel.

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suki spangles

Sun 23rd Jul 2017 07:35

Hi Rachel,

Should I stay or should I go?

And even if I leave, a part of me will still be here. Cherishing memory tinged with a feeling of "what if"..

Suki

elPintor

Sun 23rd Jul 2017 02:22

Too many amateurs out there, my dear. And the specialists who claim knowledge only by experience are few and far between.

Rachel

<Deleted User> (13762)

Sat 22nd Jul 2017 09:23

I'm having trouble finding a good plumber too.

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