On Taking My Daughter To Uni.
On Taking My Daughter to Uni.
We whirly burly roar in stacked hairy chug -chug to
Teensy flat with drill and measure
For cheeslet space.
Oh, bright-jewelled daughter listen well and
Bury the lardy sofa and face-book mats for
Garanding booklet space with
Eyes that grip the spaceous green trails
Of dinting groveous thoughts!
Beware the smootherous amorit
That hungles hearts in shiny blue.
Delete the drunk filled swishing,
Expounding minty sluice
And nostrilled dreams of woven duvets.
Embrace benoddled sacful joyous toothy grins of
Saporous lights and friendly drisoltous mates.
And doll us proud like fairies
Skinmming Satsuma rainbows
Lost we tunnel home to veletous dog and cat.
Cynthia Buell Thomas
Wed 21st Oct 2009 19:53
Jane, how clever! Talking to teenagers can be nothing but a mouthful of marbles. Super rendition.