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The Undersea River

wherever it begins
 falling down through love
 falling wherever the dream 
 might begin
the undersea river
 parallel
where the night-time slips open and stars swim
 falling through the dream
 where enfolding time spins
 outside inside everything
where a butterfly wing lifts mountains
pearls of dew sip dawn anew
entwining grass blades
and the lush emerald flames shimmer away..

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Rick Varden

Sat 28th Oct 2017 10:36

Yes Suki, my favourite too as well as ‘Dead Souls’. Cheers

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Stu Buck

Fri 27th Oct 2017 17:10

reads like a log fire full of dictionaries and love

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suki spangles

Fri 27th Oct 2017 17:03

Thank you Fred, really appreciated. Oh, by the way, yes I have "Control" on DVD. Great film isn't it. I agree too that Curtis was a poet. I know it's subjective..

My fave Joy Division song is New Dawn Fades, but there are many others.

Cheers!
Suki

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Rick Varden

Fri 27th Oct 2017 16:54

Beautifully descriptive, very therapeutic just reading it feels relaxing. Thank you.

Fred

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suki spangles

Fri 4th Aug 2017 15:02

Cheers Ray and Col,

I meditate occasionally, but those most odd experience I had was when I gave up smoking a long time ago. My eyesight changed! Everything was so much brighter, and so much more vivid in colour; it was painful for a couple of weeks... weird.

We all have a third eye, don't let the philistines tell you otherwise!

Suki

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raypool

Wed 2nd Aug 2017 12:50

Beautiful imagery Suki. Like the subconscious where dreams become reality to the individual - yours is more than adequate for the job in hand. At one time during meditation I experienced the third eye (apparently under the control of the pineal gland) and the colours were indescribably beautiful .

Ray

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Wed 2nd Aug 2017 08:17

so easy to read - words like warm butter melting into a crumpet. Delicious and dreamy. Cheers for this Suki.

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