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Far Horizons

What magnetism draws us to the sea

To watch the far horizon and to dream,

And build tall ships to take us on the tide

To sail across the foam to distant lands.

Is this the fate of all who walk this realm,

A doom that’s laid on all our island race

To journey off to find those foreign shores

And there to spend our labour and our years

What is it drives us from so sweet a home

Why leave this paradise to roam away

And yet I feel the itching in my bones

While standing here to stare across the bay

That pulls me towards the hazy deep unknown

Where mystery and adventure may be found

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◄ Bridge of Sorrows

John Michael Porter ►

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Trevor Alexander

Tue 8th Aug 2017 01:10

Cheers Colin. I know the feeling about needing the sea. I live in Bradford, pretty much in the middle of the country, and sometimes just have to head off to the coast for a fix!

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Mon 7th Aug 2017 19:15

I was talking with a friend yesterday about house moving and where to go and could we live away from the sea. Although I'm not a beach bum or an avid sunbather or sailor I did grow up by the sea 'twixt shore and South Downs and a part of me still needs that regular dose of salty air and distant straight line horizon. Or at the least, to know it is there and quite close.

I understand that draw that you picture here so well. When I lived for a few years in Leeds and then Airedale I felt hemmed in despite the beauty of the landscape and long vistas from summits. The sea just seemed too far away.

The only other landscape I have found which satisfies my soul in a similar way are the wide open spaces of America. Setting out to traverse these great distances, even by hire car, seems almost as epic as setting out to sea in a tall ship. Well at least in my imagination!

I'll shut up now. All the best, Colin.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 7th Aug 2017 13:08

There is, albeit with an absence of rhyme, a sense of John Masefield in these lines. The theme is adaptable and many
modern nations with thriving connections through military
and merchant venturing would nod in recognition. It is
certainly applicable to lands with sea shores and distant
horizons...surely a huge magnet for intrepid travellers
looking for a different life and better prospects. To mix
it up a bit: the grass is always greener on the other side
of the fence.

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Trevor Alexander

Mon 7th Aug 2017 11:55

Thanks Graham. It was originally written this week for an American audience, so I was taking no chances! lol
I might just change it on here. ?

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 7th Aug 2017 09:34

This is a lovely piece Trevor. There's almost a sway to it when reading, to mimic the voyage. Personally I don't think you needed to shorten mystery (it sounds a bit twee to me).

Good work

Graham

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