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Balcony

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Sat alone except for the cats
who've come to watch the moths
in the light above the table
I drink wine and breathe in the warm air
above the emptying restaurant below
and listen to a last group spilling onto
the Carrer d’En Bordils
with a crescendo of mopeds and laughter
and footsteps, a girl in white,
with dark limbs, glimpsed
between the railings, retreating
until there is nothing
except the night
quiet in its corners;
the sea rising and falling,
the ghost of a cat passing this way and that,
the same wine new with defeat,
the moths still working at the light.

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◄ An Hour Before

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Tom Harding

Thu 17th Aug 2017 16:20

All thanks for the kind comments. For those that guessed you're correct it's Porto cristo, although I think the ghost of a few ex holidays in Greece have influenced hence the Cohen reference!

Frances Macaulay Forde

Thu 17th Aug 2017 01:59

I totally agree with everything said here in the comments.
Also thoroughly enjoyed my 'glass of wine' (although I don't drink) and atmospheric 'visit' to your balcony. Thanks.

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Stu Buck

Wed 16th Aug 2017 11:57

brilliantly evocative and no wonder you have chosen senor cohen as the picture, this is very reminiscent of his musings

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Laura Taylor

Wed 16th Aug 2017 09:49

Mmm lovely Tom, nicely evocative, tinged with sadness. Kind of your speciality I think.

Wee typo though - 'whose' - should that not be 'who've?

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raypool

Tue 15th Aug 2017 23:23

It feels with your poems that time just suspends and allows for details to be revealed - a great trick and an enviable one Tom. A sense of mystery pervades and also timelessness.

I Can't praise it enough. POTW or i'm a Dutchman.

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Paul Waring

Tue 15th Aug 2017 17:24

Hi Tom, like this one very much, great atmosphere. As a reader, you can really imagine being there (in Porto Cristo by any chance?). Anyway, lovely poem.

Paul

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Tue 15th Aug 2017 08:11

I read the first few lines and my mind slipped away to Paris but then you took me to Spain - Mallorca? Wherever, it was lovely sitting with you and sharing that glass of wine moment Tom. Cheers! Col.

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