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Rested

And now I find

That once again I must return

To the company of those I know

Where I must shave and crave

The indulgence of those

That perhaps I would rather not

For I have found the rest

For weary limb and soul

That has lifted my constitution

To the slack and lazy unrehearsed violins

Unpractised in their solicitude

Of other’s finer points

The kissing of cheeks

Social nicety brevity

And general chit chat

 

There had been just me and you

Locked in our own

And nobody else’s company

Where for those few days we have breathed the air of freedom

Not shackled by demand

Expectation or any other charms

A place where we have remained

At one with the sea, the wind

The waves and the air

But most of all with each other

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Andy N

Wed 4th Oct 2017 12:37

love the ending here but great piece all around.

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Martin Elder

Fri 15th Sep 2017 16:50

Thanks Rose. yes my wife calls me an old romantic. Hopefully we are not a dying breed
Glad you liked it. much appreciated
Martin

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Tue 12th Sep 2017 19:49

from reading this beaut Martin,I can see that the age of romanticism is not dead,thank heaven!

loved it.


Rose ?

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Martin Elder

Tue 5th Sep 2017 10:17

Thank you Ferris Colin Stu Ray and Lynn For reading and your comments . Also thanks to Kim for liking.
I wrote this after snatching a few days away with my wife in Anglesey in July. The weather was far from perfect as in the case of British summers, but it was time away from people and expectations and all the associated stuff that goes with that, so I don't particularly care about the weather.
I know what you mean about the violins section Ray. I don't always understand what I write sometimes, But it seemed to fit.
Thanks once again to you all for reading this and your encouragement
much appreciated
Martin

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lynn hahn

Tue 5th Sep 2017 02:44

Took me on a visit to my family functions. Don't have "another" to spend time with yet. Just my dog and hey he is good company.

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raypool

Mon 4th Sep 2017 17:34

Nice one Martin. I had to read the section of unrehearsed violins a few times then it dropped neatly into place. A clever comparison indeed. I Imagine this being expressed by a celebrity in private moments away from the rapacious public.

Ray

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Stu Buck

Mon 4th Sep 2017 15:02

lovely martin. i too fear the company of others! this is vivid and dreamlike all at once. clever writing.

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Sun 3rd Sep 2017 22:18

you describe something very beautiful so very well Martin.

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