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The shame of social embarressment of a man farting loudly in a lift full of women.

The women laughed

The man stankĀ 

◄ The shame of sexual disfunction of a man with no trousers.

Advice to the Elderly November the Fifth. ►

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Noetic-fret!

Wed 18th Nov 2009 01:54

Hi tommy, i actually used to partake in this particular passtime quite a lot. I have a favourite lift in rochdale i used to visit to engage in this rather amusing passtime, however, i have given it up on account of one sad occasion i drew mud!
be well tom
mike

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Isobel

Thu 5th Nov 2009 13:01

I would have to correct you on this one Tommy. If the man stank, then the women would most likely be wretching. I suppose a loud unsmelly one might draw a laugh at a pinch... food for poetic thought?

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 3rd Nov 2009 20:22

Always a good sign when the title is twice as long as the work itself?

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