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Families at War

Sit tight, keep quiet

keep still, no lights

No emotions, no tears

no rows, no fights

Avoid confrontations

in a tin pot shelter

As hearts are beating

helter-skelter 

 

A belief in the mask

around necks to protect

but in reality a token

of advice misguided

and broken

with instructions

to lessen the panic

amid all the destruction 

 

Blacked out, sirens sounding

like a cry from the wild

the rat a tat tat

of smoking gunfire

fills the eyes and ears

with smoke and fear

apprehension always near

 

Vera Lynne never sang

about the carnage

or the blood, or the floods

of tears for the wasted years

as we strived to overcome

the evil one, but anyway...we won

Who did you think

You were kidding?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Rick Varden

Thu 16th Nov 2017 10:30

Many thanks all. It was influenced by the TV series in the 70s, and yes the end reference was to the ‘Dad’s Army’ song. Cheers!

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raypool

Wed 15th Nov 2017 22:50

A very nicely turned poem that gets really to the point with no flim - flam Fred. Ironically, Vera really epitomizes the old patriotism that is easily stirred in the threatened. During the Falklands crisis it rose again; but what you really nail is the gritty futility of the situation people faced.

A great read. Ray

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Rick Varden

Wed 15th Nov 2017 21:15

Many thanks Hannah and Emer for you kind encouragement.

Fred

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Wed 15th Nov 2017 21:01

Brilliant.


Hannah

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