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Poem of a moment

It stopped 

Right angled

To time 

Linear

A universe 

In one stop

Sliced through thought

Through the inconceivable 

Beyond the curves

Into certain predictions

Of the next 

Predetermined moments

As solid 

As the past is unchangeable

The future fixed

In the knowledge of 

Quantum certainties 

Time perceived

A universal illusion

🌷(3)

◄ Leaving Ambiguity

Intruder ►

Comments

DESMOND CHILDS

Mon 11th Dec 2017 19:12

Look like it’s just you and I for the hadron Cynthia..sorry but no guarantee on re-assemblage. I think that’s why the others chickend out. Could be curious though.

All the best Des

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 10th Dec 2017 13:50

Count me in! Dare I presume re-assemblage of parts at the end, basically in the same order? And if not, what an excellent subject to consider.

DESMOND CHILDS

Sat 9th Dec 2017 22:16

Hi Ray,
A very slippery nature of a subject,and as you say we can indulge
So I think you I and Stu should get our coats on and nip over to the hadron collider and see if they will shoot us round a few times and see what happens. Cynthia,Rose,C?l and Fred welcome too. lol

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raypool

Sat 9th Dec 2017 14:13

Impressively different and challenging Des. In view of the slippery nature of the subject we can be indulged endlessly which gives it a certain charm and relevance to other kindred matters. Blimey, i'll get me coat!

Ray

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Stu Buck

Sat 9th Dec 2017 13:10

science and poetry collide, as if shot together in the large hadron collider, creating something beautiful and crisp.

DESMOND CHILDS

Fri 8th Dec 2017 17:30

Thank you Cynthia and Rose, I very much appreciate your comments. I am glad you have both enjoyed this poem.

All the best Des

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Fri 8th Dec 2017 15:46

nothing less than brilliant Desmond.






Rose ?

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 8th Dec 2017 12:22

Terrific. Well-thought and very well-constructed.

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