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INERTIA

Inertia can bring comfort;

reason flies at it in a rage, but

soon calms down to accept its rules.

 

It's in good company

with many admirers:

lethargy, apathy, acceptance.

 

Indifference, whose bleak prospect heralds it,

unveils its faded grandeur

in a slow ceremony

 

with a grey cortege,

bowing low with a welcome.

Fighting with it brings little solace

 

as the grip of dead time tightens,

motions you to stay,

shaking your limp hand and body. 

🌷(4)

◄ RESTLESS SOULS

BRIE de MERSEY ►

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raypool

Fri 9th Feb 2018 10:57

Just spotted your like, Jonathan. Much appreciated !

Ray

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raypool

Thu 8th Feb 2018 19:32

Thanks Stu and Pat , really glad you liked this one. Much appreciated.

Laura Steve and Des i'm most grateful for your likes too.
It means a lot.

Ray

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Stu Buck

Tue 6th Feb 2018 21:39

excellent ray especially the powerful last verse

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