Drunk

I got drunk in a 
Portland bar

On Clinton st.

thirty minutes after
I had exited my
girl-friend's car,

she text
to tell me
that she had 
finished with me
and that that was that.

I sat drinking
pouring tears
into my whiskey
a guy with an
English accent
joined me

we had a good time.
I bought all the drinks
as I remember.
I left alone drunk.

A couple of days later
I went back
to the same bar
and stood in
the same place 
as previously-

I then realised that
I had been talking
to a full-length mirror.

Words and foto Tommy Carroll

 

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Sat 14th Apr 2018 03:58

Snap Margret ;
And thanks
Tommy

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Sat 14th Apr 2018 02:07

Listened to them both Col.
I've decided to make some small adjustments.

Tommy

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Margret

Tue 10th Apr 2018 04:34

If I had a nickel for every time this happened to me... ? this

<Deleted User> (13762)

Sun 1st Apr 2018 19:29

oh blimey oh gosh I love this Tommy. The first two lines had me reaching for YouTube. Apologies for sharing two of my all-time faves. Col.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RXJi3qh-Cvs

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U9Lexvl85qk

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