Backward glancing
Persephone
shifted her weight
in time to the point
she was making.
She never stood erect-
she was always
making a point.
Even with a potato peeler
there was an air
of menace-
she would mix it
in with the mash.
Her threats had
the promise
of unwanted mail
of brown envelopes
the sort that fall when
any-news-is-not-
good-news arrive.
She would direct the traffic
of your bumper-to-bumper
thoughts:
your arguments ushered
down 'men-at-work' streets
your beliefs along
'unadopted' alleys.
Her laugh when accompanied
with that gentle shake of head
was more contagian
than contageous.
She was fond of staring
through open doorways.
When backwards glancing
her laugh would fill
that empty space
and with our meeting
eyes
adore my approach.
raypool
Fri 4th May 2018 21:31
The point about attraction and repulsion side by side is a strong realistic one, Tommy. The poem feels like a redemption, and there in the realism is a real person, well described. Nice one indeed.
Ray.