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The Cull

The Cull

 

There is news of a cull to reduce our numbers

the veracity of this is endorsed by human voices

We tremble in a collective fear of annihilation

Are we to be hunted, taunted then slaughtered

Will there be time to say farewells

We huddle together waiting for the sound of gun fire

of dogs and trucks

Our young cling to their mothers

wild eyes glance to and fro

We are powerless and despised

We are to be exterminated because we are too many

we no longer serve any useful purpose

We are obsolete, a spent force, not like them

as inferior animals we will be taken from the herd

a commodity to be dispensed with

We have done nothing wrong

but we will stay together, close and united

until the end comes

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keith jeffries

Thu 10th May 2018 21:30

MC.,
thank you for a very perceptive comment to this poem. You rightly highlight that culling is not confined to a species of animal but a human practice also. Thank you for this.
Keith

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 10th May 2018 15:08

A perplexing topic in this modern world of ours - in which
"emerging" countries seem to be ravaged by over-population and diseases which then decimate human
numbers, to which we are asked to send "aid". Odd - but
perhaps part of the conundrum of the human existence
that has dominion over every other life form: to effect
rescue or extinction according to chance or circumstance.
The likes of Stalin, Hitler and Pol-Pot provided their own
methods of approaching the human existence situation
and yet with all the millions that perished as a result of
their inhumanity, the problem of over-population is even
now a cause for ongoing concern.

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keith jeffries

Thu 10th May 2018 09:32

Darren and Anya,
thank you for your comments.
Keith

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keith jeffries

Wed 9th May 2018 22:59

Hannah,
thank you for this thoughtful comment. It is much appreciated.
Keith

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Wed 9th May 2018 22:51

This is a powerful statement and it seems there is always something to threaten us, wars, weather, food shortages, disease.
Somehow the human race is never content with itself.
Thought provoking.

Hannah

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keith jeffries

Wed 9th May 2018 15:03

Colin, Hazel and Brian,
Thank you for your comments as they are much appreciated.
Keith

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keith jeffries

Wed 9th May 2018 15:01

Hello Brian, Thanks, I´ll send you a list.Keith

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Hazel ettridge

Wed 9th May 2018 10:15

I was with you all the way until the line 'we have done nothing wrong'. The whole overpopulation problem is definitely our responsibility.

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Wed 9th May 2018 09:43

Keith...I think you've hit on something here. There's too many of us and we need thinning out. If it helps I'd be willing to choose the ones to be culled.

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