Donations are essential to keep Write Out Loud going    

Fly

entry picture

Hello there little visitor
how brave of you
to cross this desk to come see me
when I think of your life
even more
fragile than mine
but perhaps this fragility
has allowed you a certain
devil may care spirit
as right now you're
heading up my arm
as easy as someone
going out to buy
the morning paper.

Well when you pause there,
an old man shivering
amongst the poplars,
is it to notice how
quiet the world becomes
when things stop?
or an involuntary
memory from long ago?
back when you were young
and the summer
only weeks old.
Well don't let
sentimentality interupt you,
in this life there
is only this moment
and then the next.
As the breeze from
the vast window
stiffens the world
about you,
your future now
in the palm of my hand.

🌷(5)

◄ Room

Cafe Scene ►

Comments

Profile image

Wood

Wed 16th May 2018 20:21

witty poem at best.
thank you for sharing your work.

Profile image

M.C. Newberry

Thu 10th May 2018 14:56

Come fly with me
Let's fly...let's fly away...
I relished these lines, having spent some weird minutes
rescuing some that had been careless enough to nosy too close to the coffee in my cup and were frantically fluttering
around like non-swimmers at the local pool. Life in all its amazing varieties sometimes instigates unexpected
responses - hard to explain when these involve the "pests"
around us that we would probably be swatting out of our
way in other circumstances.

<Deleted User> (13762)

Thu 10th May 2018 08:11

killer last line Tom and brill poem all round - just don't let anyone catch you talking to the flies...

lovely story Ray - I hope it buzzed off a happy and busy bee. We need every one of them.

it's just too easy to extinguish life - frighteningly so.

Profile image

raypool

Wed 9th May 2018 22:10

Fascinating how you have seemingly shrunk into the mind of a fly to appreciate the life it lives in the moment. Clever writing, ruminative contemplative,and considered. A touch of Larkin I think. I disentangled a bee from a spider attack recently; in a second it was gummed up, and I spent ages trying to free one wing and a back leg. I think he recovered with some sugary spooned water and a good rest.

Nice one Tom.

Profile image

Tom Harding

Wed 9th May 2018 20:08

Oops yes thanks Colin- I uploaded from my phone on a train so was a bit distracted!

<Deleted User> (13762)

Wed 9th May 2018 19:21

did you forget the title Tom?

If you wish to post a comment you must login.

This site uses cookies. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.

Find out more Hide this message