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Pleasure

He won't know

He won't know I

Touched

To feel something

Pleasurable

 

He won't know

He won't know I

Touched

To the thought

Of him

 

I miss him

I miss him

I miss him

I miss him

Oh god!

 

He won't know

He won't know I

Broke

To the rule

Of his

 

Created on February 27, 2018

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Phillip Kelly

Wed 30th May 2018 23:52

Amazing parallellism and repitition in this poem that evokes hyperbole and intense emotion..... The power of this poem is in its structure....

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