Cat/Mat/Sat
A rhyme it needs a rhythm
To help it lilt along
Without this rhyming rhythm
To me, it sounds all wrong
Why can't I write a rhyme
That sounds like Jack and Jill
To me what is important
Is it's done with rhyming skill
Many rhymes are bad rhymes
They just rhyme cat with mat
(And yes, our cat he did sat
And wondered where he's at)
Skill is non-existent
Rhyming words inane
Messages escape me
Wasted verse, no gain
So rhymes they need a rhythm
And if like Jack and Jill
Then cleverly constructed
With no cat/mat rhyme fill
Don Matthews April 2018
Don Matthews
Sun 3rd Jun 2018 01:33
A rhyme it needs a rhythm
And yes, you're right MC
I feel, without this rhythm
Great discordancy
You'll note my lines are 3-beat
I really like this kind
I like this 3-beat metronome
Pulsing in my mind