June Collage Poem - Negatives
Riots in another Eden, Eve’s tearful funeral,
Her truth was a lie and was all about Eve
Caged across anonymous affairs
Over poetic contexts in fragmented narratives
Through expectant open-mouthed pockets where paradise
Would never be the same again
Eve has escaped the serpent
But not its bite, she chases the dragon now
The blackened souls will always rule,
But not in the back yards of Accrington town
A face, ghostly face,
No body.
Somebody
My little girl and me
Life of us left.
Love blushes. Spiders swim in web.
Silent discos, joyriders, funereal laughter, virgin queens:
Negatives become positives; positives become negatives.
In cashew fields, with dormant grace
She sweeps up confetti amongst rusty chairs.
Don Matthews
Tue 12th Jun 2018 01:26
Like Brian I don't have a clue what's going on here? Now what bothers me is he likes it? As my mentor it seems I still have a long way to go. I do know about Eve and the serpent Stockport and I'm sure I will be able to appreciate more 'vague' verse with Brian's excellent tuition as I progress.
Don ?