A Marriage of Ghosts - July 2018 Collage Poem
Aqueous humour's not very funny
Neither is how easily we forget
The story of each other's pain
Arranged marriages of spirits and the
remnants of deep pain
The sky is a plush blue velvet
Its papery clouds are upon it
As if they are lace - the
Dew glistens on the grass
Like numerous bright eyes looking
Up at the sky
The wrong arrangement can be distant,
Can be cold, can be marriage
Between two ghosts
Half-blind mouse circumnavigates a cat's shadow,
Cast by barrels on a cellar wall
The one-eyed moggy muses on his strike time.
Short and wailing walls,
A growing body of similar similes:
The raindrops smell of splintered bone.
Don Matthews
Wed 11th Jul 2018 13:27
I know I'm not skilled in the intricacies of poetic appreciation, but I understood the idea was to communicate to the reader in a way they could understand and take something worthwhile away. I'm sorry, but I haven't a clue what you're talking about or trying to communicate here.
DM ?