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I Am

I am nothing more than minimum wage
or thirty-eight hours a week.
I'm four weeks off a year
rising to five after one year of service.
I'm a pension that I may not see
I'm a house I'll never own,
I am all the things I own
but don't need.
I am a fourteen pound a week bus-pass
then a ten minute walk
uphill.
I am fifteen minutes of preparation
of stillness
I am eight hours of sadness
A sandwich, a cup of tea,
I am eight hours of no consequence.
A ten minute walk
downhill
a thirty minute wait
forty minutes
fifty minutes
I am cold, wet and bothered.
I am not home.

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Dave Bradley

Sat 26th Dec 2009 20:22

Chris has drawn this poem to my attention and I have to agree it is very striking. Particularly pertinent to me as I've just escaped being a wage slave.

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Francine

Thu 24th Dec 2009 15:10

There is a sadness in this that it could be anyone. A person who goes through the motions... One who feels that their life is meaningless - that they have no real purpose.

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Jon

Thu 24th Dec 2009 13:27

Recently read your other stuff and love this! A sad reflection on our working lives in modern day Britain.Reminds me a bit of old punk songs,stuff by the Jam,etc.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 24th Dec 2009 12:36

I totally agree with Chris; this is very engaging, and a great social comment. That 'fifteen minutes' of quiet preparation is intriguing. I considered 'teaching' might be your job, but fifteen minutes before class is likely not enough time, and a school is rarely quiet. The poem is thought-provoking.

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