Restoration

Restoration

 

I woke up to realise that I was in a concrete shell

for some time I had been incacerated in this cell

I had grown accustomed to its routine

in a world that I had never really seen

 

I was frightened by this overpowering reality

as I began to doubt any sense of my sanity

Was I blinded by a nauseous gas

to find that I was quite friendless

 

I began to pack my treasured belongings

from jackets, books, shoes and stockings

I made haste and ready to flee

and not to remain here for eternity

 

When I look back I do not see myself

only an empty vessel left on a shelf

Soon these futile thoughts steadily faded

as I felt renewed and no longer jaded

 

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◄ Destitute

Cast into outer Darkness ►

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Shalom Jordans

Wed 4th Jul 2018 20:51

your words are very powerful and motivating keith thank you

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Don Matthews

Mon 25th Jun 2018 16:04

The more I read this Keith the more subtle and clever it became. You even did some 'sort of end-rhymes'..... Well done. ?

<Deleted User> (18980)

Mon 25th Jun 2018 09:06

Keith - I know what you mean. I was taking your poem too literally. I myself was in a situation where I was comfortably trapped...so I broke out and am now even more comfortably trapped, though now I like it!

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keith jeffries

Mon 25th Jun 2018 08:44

Darren, Anya and Brian,
Thank you for your comments. This need not be in any particular location. It is a situation borne out familiarity and bordeom when one suddenly realises that one is in a trap and needs to be liberated in order to realise one´s true potential.
Keith

<Deleted User> (18980)

Mon 25th Jun 2018 08:08

I'm guessing that the concrete shell was a flat in Manchester or somewhere similar...

<Deleted User> (19421)

Mon 25th Jun 2018 07:40

? - Onward & upwards!

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