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So inattentive and so frail

We are so very frail, the skin we’re in,
listening to our bodies is something we do very poorly
trudging on when we should be
holding back or stopping completely.

Suddenly it hits us
the unforgiving wall of mental illness
or the crippling pain of physical struggle
Only then do we stop and open our eyes
to the mess we’re in.

If only we were even every so often conscious
of our mental and physical state
then, our vulnerabilities would not
be so repeatedly and so openly visible.

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frail

◄ Hold on tight, it’s a rocky ride

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Jon Stainsby

Wed 18th Jul 2018 21:16

Thank you, Jane.

Sorry I forgot to thank you, MC.

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Wed 18th Jul 2018 19:20

Your words ring true for many. A great poem!

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 4th Jul 2018 16:30

The paradox of the human entity is its apparent weakness
and its unexpected resilience. Daily, it is under attack from unseen enemies - without and within - and carries on the
fight 24/7 on our behalf. It is only those times when it is
overwhelmed for whatever reason that we are aware of
something wrong - major or minor - and seek relief/cure.

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Jon Stainsby

Wed 4th Jul 2018 09:45

Thank you, Darren.

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Wed 4th Jul 2018 09:43

spot on Jon! Well written and very true!

Cheers

DJB

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Jon Stainsby

Wed 4th Jul 2018 08:00

Thank you, Damon.

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Damon Blackery

Wed 4th Jul 2018 07:55

This is beautifully written. ??

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