The Astronomer's gaze
She offers me a slice of peach ,
I look to the stars instead.
She lifts a burning ember
-as tribute to my face-
then counts the stars like seconds,
her voice is as a child’s,
counting slow and with surprise
then with self-admonishment
she looks at me and tuts,
her finger numbers them- again.
She leans backwards, elbows
into the sand
and tells me she is bored
with counting and huffs
for my attention, I turn my gaze
to a newly cleared moon,
then with closed eyes I sigh.
She sits up and clasps her knees
and looking at the fire hums
a tune from antiquity.
Then retrieving the peach
she offers it to me again-
this time against my lips.
‘You've finished counting stars then?’
I ask, with eyes still closed
and add ‘Persephone’.
I know she smiles, as I feel the
shape of her mouth
against my lips.
Words and image Tommy Carroll
Tommy Carroll
Fri 21st Sep 2018 12:00
Keith, ta. As with Ray's comment I appreciate your thinking about the verse.
Tommy