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I'm Watching My Mind Ride a See-Saw

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I'm Watching My Mind Ride a See-Saw

 

I've got this Spike Milligan mind

You're beginning to see on your screen

A split second journey 10,000 miles

Extracted from where it has been

 

From source here, I see it on see-saw

It's Serious in charge, on the ground

While Comic's sky-high on the see-saw

But it's I who holds keys to this round

 

You mean don we can't play around?

See-sawing 'tween Comic and Serious?

You've unleashed us before, let us free

But this time you lock us, won't let us?

 

There's a place for you, Serious and Comic

I'm afraid that place's not here, and not now

I've keyed in the lock for you, Serious

You have work to do, I'll show you how

 

don, Serious here, what shall I tell them?

These minds from 10,000 miles away

Tell them I want intellectual interaction

Go tell them, go say what I say

 

Go tell them I think rather different

Go tell them I think rather strange

Go tell them some might think I'm way-out

Go tell them I think way off-range

 

But Serious ... yes?... I'm still here...

 

The question I keep asking myself

Asking myself as a writer

Does staying on-range as a writer

Does this make me any much righter?

 

I've listened don to what you say

A writer on-range can be right

But the off-range writer rights they can also

Be just as right as on-range rights

 

Don Matthews July 2018

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AM Cash

Fri 27th Jul 2018 09:27

The dark humour of a disturbed mind and search for acceptance through laughter. A great poem capturing the see saw of the mind.

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Don Matthews

Wed 25th Jul 2018 14:01

Taylor - Yes, there's a lot in this one. It took others several reads also.

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Taylor Crowshaw

Wed 25th Jul 2018 13:45

Hi Don,
Having just read your message put a different spin on this poem for me. A lot in it
its a double read for me. Enjoyed it a lot. Very insightful.
Thanks for that Don.

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Don Matthews

Tue 24th Jul 2018 01:04

Serious and Fun are always playing games in my mind. Keeping the little tykes under control at times is like a parent trying to keep unruly kids under control. But I try my best and give them each equal play in the spotlight - they have hidden desires for greatness which I try to dampen without hurting their feelings ?

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 23rd Jul 2018 16:33

The use in writing of "fun"
Can also get other things done,
With something serious to say
That won't let minds stray,
And gets through in more ways than one!

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Don Matthews

Mon 23rd Jul 2018 14:15

Serious, Comic...yes?...There's a time and place for you both. Serious, you're time was in my poem. Comic, your time's now in the FUN BUS...wheeee

ribbit... ?

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Mon 23rd Jul 2018 12:43

Don't let Serious on the Fun Bus Don...he'll put a real dampener on things.

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Don Matthews

Mon 23rd Jul 2018 00:57

FUN BUS is at garage for grease and oil change in prep for trip to 'DM vs BM Alliteration Contest'.

Gina says hi...

Tyson says woof...

Froggie says ribbit...

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