Ripped Away
Ripped Away
You came to see me for a day
departing too soon ripped away.
The wall I had built over time tumbled and fell.
I had to stay when you crossed the sea
you have others.. dad only has me.
Siblings raised along with me,
loved but lost across the sea.
A mother so loved but so far away,
appears now and then just to be ripped away.
An emptiness replaces emotion.
Loneliness replacing your devotion.
Stomach wrenching gut churning tears as I lay,
you are always ripped away.
I want you to give comfort a place to rest,
to soothe this aching in my breast.
I want to beg you to stay,
but I still my voice, my tears, as I smile and wave.
You have taken so much from me.
Every time l want..I need you to stay
Yet again you're ripped away.
© 2018 Taylor Crowshaw
Martin Elder
Thu 2nd Aug 2018 22:56
Without doubt there is a good deal of passion written in this piece with well placed repletion of certain lines to place th emphasis on what you want to say.
Nice one