Breathless

Breathless

The depleted quality of the air
Not enough oxygen for two to share
A scorching heat intense in its ferocity
Leaves me questioning my impetuosity.

A Valencian sun beats down on me.
No shade to find no bowing tree.
Trickling sweat on my brow
Release me from this tortuous heat NOW

I imagined myself wafting in a perfumed haze.
That my beauty would amaze.
Drinking wine and eating tapas.
Now none of that frippery matters.

I trudge along ten paces behind.
My energy levels are low I find.
Instead of strolling hand in hand.
We look like players in a marching band.

A holiday meant to be such fun.
If I had a choice from it I would run.
Instead of looking like a Greek goddess
I just look a bloody mess.

Taylor Crowshaw

 

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Hugh

Sat 4th Aug 2018 23:37

A poetic prognosis of the effect the heat has on us.Let us hope the Sun reads your poem and weakens its beam.Warm words,great poem.

<Deleted User> (9882)

Sat 4th Aug 2018 14:26

a passing through of the suns unusual era without any doubt

great stuff Taylor.



Rose ?

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Sat 4th Aug 2018 12:26

Taylor you've left me speechless...Bravo!❤

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Don Matthews

Sat 4th Aug 2018 10:35

I could feel the heat dripping Taylor. Nicely done

Brian - I have never been to Spain but caught having to live in a broken-down combivan in a garage in Rome mid summer is something I wouldn't wish on anyone. Bloody troppo caldo...ouch ?

<Deleted User> (18980)

Sat 4th Aug 2018 09:08

Spain - you're in the hottest place in the world at present.

Hace muchisimo calor!

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