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An Acorn's Story

An Acorn's Story

Long ago my mother tree, grew an acorn, that was me.
I fell onto the dusty ground where I just rolled round and round.


A hungry squirrel had her eye on me,
a juicy little morsel for her tea.
She approached with the intention of wolfing me down.
Until a bigger squirrel came along, eyebrows raised with a deadly frown.


In the hubub and kerfuffle, I rolled right under some rubble.
Dark and warm between those bricks,
just the place I would have picked.
I sent my root to explore the soil, to anchor me firmly in place,
where the squirrel cannot find me, I haven't left a trace.


Through the winter I rest and sleep, drinking every now and then.
As spring creeps across the forest floor I find myself awake again.
My shell makes an awful sound as it cracks and falls onto the ground.
I stretch young shoots to find some light, to feed me from the warm sunlight.


Beginnings of a tree that is me.


I have been left alone, and a few years on I have grown.
Next to me stands a mighty oak tree, if I am lucky that could be me.
The seasons gently come and go, woodland plants putting on show after show.


One winter's day as I slumbered, I felt a hand softly stroke my bark.
One man points and calls to another, 'This one would look grand in the park!!'
I am dug around and ripped up from the ground.
From that safe place which I had found.


I am shaking and rumbling along in a truck.
Discarding roots and plenty of muck.
Finally we come to rest, and wait for it, this part is the best.


Carried gently to my new home, lowered carefully into a pre-dug hole.
From where they had recently evicted an angry mole.
Space and light abound, in this new home that I have found.
This is just the place for me.

 

It is where I will become a mighty oak tree.

 

© 2018 Taylor Crowshaw

 

 

 

 

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Comments

elPintor

Sat 11th Aug 2018 02:06

Taylor, it's a fine story..

I'll just say because I'm in the mood, it reminds me of going on weekly excursions to the woods where my family had put a bit of money into a small camp.

We would go on family hikes and identify trees by their leaves and we ate beech tree seeds--I can almost taste them now. Anyhow, I remember how plentiful they were, scattered on the ground. Even of those that burrowed, only some would survive the fight for light from the thick and fertile forest floor.

It's a tough fight, Taylor--here's to another season...

Rachel

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Hugh

Thu 9th Aug 2018 18:05

Treemendous.Well done

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Daemon Cantrell

Thu 9th Aug 2018 16:00

Beautiful..

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Thu 9th Aug 2018 15:47

A really great poetic story! Bravo!!!

Ditto on Big Sal's comments.?❤

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AVISHEK GHOSH

Thu 9th Aug 2018 15:46

Wonderful

Big Sal

Thu 9th Aug 2018 14:52

Can't wait to see these stories in book form.?

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