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Fading..

Bundled with the drudgery of life,

Dreams are getting gloomy

day by day.

Walking over the sharp knife

reached at bay.

Our pure laughter,cries have reduced

to a microscopic size,

Our feelings are concoted

Love has become a compromise.

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Taylor Crowshaw

Thu 9th Aug 2018 22:40

A wonderful poem. Thank you ?

<Deleted User> (19836)

Thu 9th Aug 2018 15:51

This is my favorite from you so far! Bravo! ?❤

Big Sal

Thu 9th Aug 2018 15:02

The fine line of life personified as a blade. . .Powerful.

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