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Open Market

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Its an open market

Everything is sold here -

Love,hatred and care.

We are all commodities

Here your every smile can get

a good fare.

greed , violence and sex

are sold at a high price.

Its a handy chance

to be fit on the moden paradise.

Some hamane outletsĀ 

are on the way to be bankrupted,

One step before gettinng ultra modern,

Make haste to be corrupted.

🌷(3)

◄ Fading..

Bloom My Love ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (19836)

Thu 16th Aug 2018 17:23

A very clever poem. I happen to agree with you...wouldn't a world without greed, hate and violence be nice! A well thought out and nicely written piece. Thanks, Jane?

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AVISHEK GHOSH

Wed 15th Aug 2018 13:33

Thanks a lot Big Sal .Your comments are always iinspiring.

Big Sal

Tue 14th Aug 2018 19:21

Spoken like a modern volume of Shakespeare.?

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