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Bloom My Love

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Like the petals opens up

And be a flower 

Spreading bliss,

Oh!dear open your lips,

I wanna kiss.

Let us lost in the labyrinths

forever and ever,

Our earth is decaying first

Let us love now or never.

I am withered feather,

Tossing in the lap of air,

Hide me your bosom,

Love me o dear.

Let your touch play piano

on my dropping thoughts,

Let your glance lash over my soul

Save the prolonged draughts.

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<Deleted User> (18118)

Sat 18th Aug 2018 18:45

Passionate. Beautiful.

Hannah

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sat 18th Aug 2018 16:12

Avishek this is beautifully written..bravo ?

<Deleted User> (19913)

Sat 18th Aug 2018 10:36

This is beautiful Avishek. Love the piano line.

<Deleted User> (19836)

Sat 18th Aug 2018 07:49

Fantastic! Filled with optimism, love and good energy! Well done Avishek. ?Jane

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