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Swissy Miss

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Swissy Miss

 

I'm struggling with this poem team

About my Swissy Miss

Can I get there, nail it?

Or will I fly past, miss ?

 

Now this is rather interesting

The second, fourth lines end

With rhyming words identical

But different meanings send

 

Poetic license I do like

Allows me scope to break

Rules the Rhyming Board lay down

Rules the Board do make

 

You'll notice I'm still struggling

With my Swissy Miss

Can I sorta tie her up

With Gina, Tina's sis ?

 

Now Don you're pushing limits here

License goes so far

The Board they will not like it

Don't go and start a war

 

Let's try connect some dots between

Gina and Swiss Miss....

Well?... Gina flew to Switzerland

Both ways, first class, Air Swiss

 

(nice dot-connect Don)

 

Now have I met the brief team ?

On rhyming something Swiss-ish ?

I would have done a better job

If you had picked theme British

 

You could have chosen cheese, Don

Or watches that they do

Instead of trying integrating

Swiss Miss/Gina too

 

(OK but Gina insisted on being in it...)

 

(Never let a woman tell you what to do Don. Especially one you've created...)

 

Don Matthews August 2018

 

SWISS MISS KNOCK KNOCK SLAP SLAP

SWISS MISS   TRA LA LA

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<Deleted User> (19836)

Sat 18th Aug 2018 07:58

Funny and creative as always!??

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Don Matthews

Sat 18th Aug 2018 07:57

Thankyou Brian for this advice
My rhymic struggle with Swiss
I could have done a baser word
But not my style ('twas piss) ?

Oh, I have just seen your clever
Pun with my Swissy Miss
She wouldn't be too happy Brian
Suggesting you give her a miss

<Deleted User> (18980)

Sat 18th Aug 2018 07:23

Don

When you're struggling to rhyme with Swiss
Just don't bother...give it a miss

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sat 18th Aug 2018 06:57

Funny..?

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