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House I Hear You Calling

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House, I Hear You Calling

 

House, I hear you calling

Come rid me of my dust

Gosh, you are persistent

If I really must

 

Trouble is I'm 'dicted

To my computer screen

Watching all these UK

Minds (themselves unseen)

 

How then would you feel like

Dust-covered just like me

Would you still be able

To see your poetry?

 

I hear what you are saying

I hear you through your dust

To make you/me both happy

I'll clean you. Yes you must

 

Don Matthews June 2018

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 19th Aug 2018 17:22

I'm reminded of the song "This Old House" - sung by Rosemary Clooney (or was it Jo Stafford?) on one of
those old 78s of yesteryear. But what
is dust but transferred matter? I recall Quentin Crisp boasting that his city flat in New York was a haven for the stuff. My own attitude is to become active when it is adopting a layer-like appearance - or threatens to dull the
sharp images of my PC/TV screens!! Then a flick of the
duster or a weary push of the floor cleaner is resorted to
under this tiresome visual pressure.

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Taylor Crowshaw

Sun 19th Aug 2018 14:06

I really must stop writing and get dusting. Good one ?

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Don Matthews

Sun 19th Aug 2018 12:03

Now this is rather interesting
I've got you rhyming too
Hugh and Brian have hopped on board
Joined the Hoover crew

Who else is gonna come on board?
And join both Brian and Hugh
Who else out there in rhyming land
Will Hoover along too? ?

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Hugh

Sun 19th Aug 2018 11:20

The dust is settling everywhere,
On your table on your chair.
The spider's webbed around your blind.
Kill him now don't be kind.

Otherwise you will be overrun,
By spiders ,dust and not much fun.
I see an ant crawl on your floor.
Hurry ,hurry close the door.

Yes you must get rid of the dust,
As previously you have discussed.
Get the hoover out from under the stairs,
Be a house owner who really cares.

Switch it on you really must,
And get rid of all the dirty dust.

<Deleted User> (18980)

Sun 19th Aug 2018 07:57

The cleanliness of your house
would not pass muster
so come on Aussie Don
attack it with your duster

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