Beautiful raindrops
Dropping silent raindrops into your hair
Watching them slowly roll down onto your face
while the sun adds its rainbow tint
to their beaded form.
Crying is my best answer to this beauty
Smiling is the response to my tears.
Dropping silent raindrops into your hair
Watching them slowly roll down onto your face
while the sun adds its rainbow tint
to their beaded form.
Crying is my best answer to this beauty
Smiling is the response to my tears.
<Deleted User> (19421)
Tue 21st Aug 2018 07:29
Oh WOW Jon
this is lovely!
The last two lines - what a beautiful sentiment!
cheers
DJB
Full of emotion beautiful. Thank you Jon ?
Kind words, Big Sal. Thank you.
Big Sal
Mon 20th Aug 2018 18:34
Line by line it unfolds like a scroll containing long-forgotten information. Well done Jon, it's good for being so short.?
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jennifer Malden
Tue 21st Aug 2018 16:54
Beautiful writing!
Jennifer