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When I get mad I write poetry

Some of my best poetry is written in the space

between drunkenness and pain

Before I drink too much to regret

Or fall asleep and forget

 

Some of my best poetry is written in the space

between thoughtfulness and folly

When I’m mad enough for words to whirl

but not for blood to boil

 

When I’m mad enough for blood to boil

but not enough for it to spill

 

When I’m mad enough to reach for the pen

but not for the knife

When I’m bewildered by existence

but still cherish my life

 

Then poetry is my shield

between myself and me

Poetry is written

Words set me free

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Mac

Tue 28th Aug 2018 16:09

Love this, can really relate! I will definitely check out your channel. Thanks for being here.

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Martin Elder

Tue 28th Aug 2018 10:37

great poem Becky. I agree with Sal get it out there don't keep it and poetry is an ideal medium


Nice one

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Mon 27th Aug 2018 21:32

Great poem Becky! I really liked that last stanza. It brought all your words to a grand closing. ?

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Don Matthews

Mon 27th Aug 2018 16:05

Good thoughts and lines here Becky ?

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Taylor Crowshaw

Mon 27th Aug 2018 16:01

Enjoyed this Becky poetry is a release..?

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Becky Who

Mon 27th Aug 2018 14:25

Thanks everyone. I nearly called it "is this rhyming scheme even allowed?" as it seems so irregular to me. Makes a change I guess.

I am lost

Mon 27th Aug 2018 13:44

Such a wonderful poem.

Big Sal

Mon 27th Aug 2018 13:28

Loved every bit of this one. The inspiration behind it, the accurate depictions of poetic proportions, and the insight to leave the knife for a pen.

Very well done. Keeping anger in only poisons the mind and soul, but writing to vent that steam can mean the difference between life and death for many that do it. Great one!?

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Mon 27th Aug 2018 13:07

Well constructed piece Becky.

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