Get Out
I have to leave the house tomorrow
Fatigue energized by hope-
lessness
Depression fueled by gas-
lighting
Truth obscured by astro-
turfing
Men & women of honor being held up
to ridicule
A nation dedicated to human rights saving families from
each other
Deaths of innocents lending grievance for
self-preservation
Relationships fired up and burning
out
I have to try to leave the house tomorrow.
U have a wonderfully unique style to how u structure ur poems.... Im trying to write poems in this similar style... But im too obsessed by structure and rhyme scheme porms
<Deleted User> (19421)
Thu 30th Aug 2018 15:06
Great app stuff Mac, I really like your idea of AstroTurf obscuring truth...
Just read your profile and think that your sample poem is also great!
Cheers
DJB
Wonderfully written Mac...first and last line brilliant...'men and women of honour being held up to ridicule'..?..good stuff thought provoking..keep it up..Taylor?
Big Sal
Wed 29th Aug 2018 18:46
Those last two lines sum up the last 2 years in America right now. Great, emotionally evocative piece. Enjoyed it.?
I can really relate to this. I like the vivid opposites in each phrase. Thank you!
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Mac
Mon 3rd Sep 2018 21:34
Thank you everyone for your kind comments! Means a lot to me!