Walking home on a summer evening
The black splat shape of the ragged rook
the egg-smooth hoot of the owl sailing.
The skittering bat goes back and forth
as we walk up the deep dark lane.
High hedges make a secret path
cushioning the sides of our home journey.
A confetti of moths scatter in our wake
an escort for our returning.
The torch is abandoned,
the night is so pretty
we follow our noses
across the wide fields.
The stiles, we remember,
old friends of great character
they will not trip us,
help us up and over.
The footpath gleams softly,
a light that is tracing,
more prominent to us
when our eyes look away.
Don’t worry, don’t concentrate,
let the soft evening guide us.
We hold hands on our doorstep
at the end of the day.
for M, two years, still missed xx
Dave Bradley
Thu 28th Jan 2010 16:33
How could I miss this? Lovely. The understatement of emotion somehow heightens it and makes it more poignant