Tell me what you think
Tell me what you think of my words,
my poems,
the stories I create.
Tell me what you think of my wit,
my worlds I make,
the way I write.
Tell me what you think I do well,
could do better,
give me another outlook on my writing.
Tell me what you think because
your opinions matter.
They help me realize how well I write,
what I do well,
what I did or wrote wrong.
I need your say in this,
because you make me a better
person and writer when you
tell me what you think.
You matter to me,
even if you think you don’t.
You are my saving grace,
my anchor.
I came here for a safe haven,
a sanctuary,
but I wasn’t sure what you’d think.
Was I bad?
Was I good?
I didn’t expect to be good at all.
But you showed me my talent.
I want to say thank you for all
that you’ve done for me.
How did I do?
On this poem?
Tell me what you think,
if you want.
It helps me grow.
Space Girl
Wed 26th Sep 2018 21:40
I agree wholeheartedly.
I also thank you so much
For your help.
I have grown so much
Under your advice and comments.
This is helping me light my way.