thrusting green shoots
speckle dark branches
a sparrow alights
floral perfume
on mellow evening breeze
a blood-red sun sets
autumn coloured leaves
covering forest glade
a murmuration flies
stark dank branches
clawing into dark skies
a snowflake falls
I'm still a bit uncomfortable with haiku - never sure what's good. So thanks for the confidence boost.
<Deleted User> (9882)
Mon 17th Sep 2018 11:46
I'll second that with pleasure Trev. Brillsville!
Rose ?
lovely haiku trev. i particularly like the second, lot of descriptive imagery yet still holds its form.
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<Deleted User> (13762)
Tue 18th Sep 2018 14:14
they work for me Trevor.