NONDESCRIPT
"How're ye doin' honey?
I got here as soon as I could."
He's all strapped up,
tubes like spaghetti,
leg in a splint.
"I'm doin' jus' fine, i'm OK you know. "
Multiple fractures,
bed curtains fastracking,
stethoscopes wagging,
emergency vehicles
not long from the scene.
"How'd it happen, what's the news?"
"Well, he came outta nowhere,
I never saw nuttin',
but things are OK,
don't fret honey,
i'll be out in a day."
"I don't think I can tell junior yet awhile,
i'll tell him you've stayed over at the office,
you know how he plays up, gets upset....."
Music fades in - camera pans out,
the credits roll up.
It's one of those endings;
no surprises, he died at the start.
Sorta weepy,
but back then in the fifties that was cinema art.
raypool
Sun 23rd Sep 2018 22:39
Nice of you to say so, Martin. I know we both enjoy that delving back, and I do enjoy some aspects of the past. I try not to wear rose tined specs all the time though!
All the best Ray