The Bricky Pond
The Bricky Pond
The Bricky Pond
An urban beauty spot
Chalkhill Blue butterflies
It’s the only place I’d ever seen them
Hay jumps
Risking life and limb for two seconds of mid-air excitement
Summersaults and soft landings
Ducks-and-drakes
Thirteen kisses on the glasslike surface
Sticklebacks and frogspawn
I saw a grass snake once
The water stank of dead dogs, and pond weed
But I only remembered the Chalkhill Blue butterflies
It’s the only place I ever saw them
It’s where I learnt to swim
Chucked in by my cruel dad
“Crocodile coming”
As he launched a railway sleeper
He made sure I got a mouthful
And kicked the dog for trying to save me
Poor Kim
Rotten Dad
The water tasted of dead dogs, and pondweed
I still remember Chalkhill Blue butterflies
It’s the only place I ever saw them
I spoke to an old guy recently
He was still upset about losing a school friend when he was a nipper
The lad had gone swimming in the Bricky pond
He got a mouthful
Water poisoned with dead dogs, and pondweed
He never mentioned the Chalkhill Blue butterflies
raypool
Mon 24th Sep 2018 14:17
A very fulfilling read Kevin. So much mileage in ponds above or below. A lovely balance of beauty and grimness.
Ray